I think i succeed in explaining who my target audience was and what gender i was aiming it at by stating age range, what hobbies and interests relating to the artist and what genre.I Let my audience know what kind of narrative i was going for and how i would portray this on camera.I made it clear what kind narrative i was going for what genre and how it would relate to my artist .I think i explained what locations i would like to use well and why i chosen those specific locations in relation to my artists and how they would work well for the narrative.I expressed the representations of women well and whether id be for against the stereotypes/ideology.
I feel i could of use more visual images and explained more who the artist was e.g there background and specifically there music.I think i could of added more information about the kind of ancillary products related to the artist and how that would benefit the artist itself.I feel i could of spoken more and read out more of what i had written rather than picking out small sections as I may of missed important information out.I could of elaborated more on what kind of video it would be like e.g giving examples of currents videos with the same aspects of colour, editing, costumes which would of given the audience an idea of what i was aiming for.
The improvements I would make would be to make my presentation longer by adding more detail, visuals e.g more videos and pictures.I would practice speaking through the presentation before it has to be pitched so i am confident with the presentation and see if i have missed any vital info.I would make sure that all spelling and grammar is thoroughly checked before as some of my sentences didn't make sense.Overall i would make the presentation longer, more interesting for the audience by adding in visuals,videos,questions and more time for discussion at the end.
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